Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Use of Adjectives

I am going to give a description, like we have been doing in class and see if you can guess the subject?


The night was freezing but the wind was warm. As a lay there on a bed of sand and felt the icy mist on my soft skin, my mind pondered as I waited for him to arrive. My heart is racing and beating hard inside of my chest. My body is covered in chill bumps, I am so nervous I am shivering. My mind keeps striding back and forth as to what I should do, if I should even be here waiting. Just thinking how young I am, and if my parents were to find my large comfortable bed empty how much trouble I would be in. He is a few years older, and we have not been dating to long but he promises that he loves me, but how would I know, I had never experienced true love before, I feel that I love him but how would I know this is what love feels like. What if I just like him. It seems like I am ready but what if I am not, what if I just want this happy feeling inside of me to last. What if I just want him to like me forever, but is this the way to do that, I am so confused and lost. I wish someone would just appear and give me the right answer. I have been laying here about an hour waiting, where is he. As I watched the bright glowing stars in the darkened sky and smelt the aroma of ocean water, I heard his soft voice, I looked away from the sky and up at him, he layed down beside me, and wrapped his large, gentle arms around me, I felt protected.

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